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Dear Fellow Sagittarian

Dear fellow Sagittarius
You need to crumble under the multiuniversal pressures you've put up around yourself.
You need to succeed to the dominion of prophecy. Your catapulting glances at success are minimal.
You are going from dining cart to dining cart on the great train trying to find the conductor.
Why do you want off of the only direction there is to go? They say you are the most philosophical of signs.
Where are my signs, I am ready to receive them. Trying to remember the color of your comfort.
Going down a crowded slope, piles of

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Dear Fellow SagittarianDear fellow Sagittarius
You need to crumble under the multiuniversal pressures you've put up around yourself.
You need to succeed to the dominion of prophecy. Your catapulting glances at success are minimal.
You are going from dining cart to dining cart on the great train trying to find the conductor.
Why do you want off of the only direction there is to go? They say you are the most philosophical of signs.
Where are my signs, I am ready to receive them. Trying to remember the color of your comfort.
Going down a crowded slope, piles of Dear Fellow Sagittarian
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Devious Journal Entry

Tue Jun 11, 2002, 12:17 AM

Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the velvet sea
Ive been wading in the velvet seai took a moment
Ive been wading in the velvet seafrom my day
Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the velvet seaand wrapped it up
Ive been wading in the velvet seain things you say
Ive been wading in the velvet sea
Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the velvet seaand mailed it off to your address
Ive been wading in the velvet seayou'll get it pretty soon
Ive been wading in the velvet seai guess
the packaging begins to break
and all the points i'm trying to make
are tossed with thoughts into a bin
time leaks out my life leaks in
you wont find moments in a box
and someone else will set your clocks
I took a moment from my day
and wrapped it up in things you say
and mailed it off to you.

you wont find moments in a box
and someone else will set your clocks
I took a moment from my day
Ive been wading in the velvet sea
Ive been wading in the velvet sea
Ive been wading in the velvet sea
Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the velvet sea
Ive been wading in the velvet sea
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Ive been wading in the
Ive been wading in the velvet sea
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Ive been wading in the velvet sea
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Ive been wading in the velvet sea
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Ive been wading in the velvet sea
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i'm a slaaaaave for you";"

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!jesusbite Feb 13, 2005, 4:38:39 PM

So, I finally got a list up and running for the Link of the Night. If you're not on it (as in, don't get this message, and you want to), shoot me a note, or leave a message or just somehow let me know. Same goes for the instance that you want off the list - please let me know.

Happiness, by

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The Interview, by

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Rusting Bridges of Suburbia, by

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So, I did some peruzing, and earthed up these three pieces.
Happiness is beautiful in its own simplicity, and has a subtle kick to it that I find lacking in a lot of reading these days.
The Interview is an interesting little for-the-stage piece that I found myself cracking up over, all over the place. There's some great humor and dialogue going on here, as well as some great subtle toss-ins for the actors to experiment with. Something I would love to see performed.
While Rusting Bridges of Suburbia might be a little ho-hum subject-wise, the rhythm and control of meter that ~ honestbrutality has accomplished here is impeccable. It takes a lot of practice and a lot of control of vocabulary to get a good rhythm in a slam piece these days, and it's done beautifully here.

Get writing, fuckos. *jesusbite

!jesusbite Oct 19, 2004, 10:25:59 AM

no problem.

~siedhr Apr 3, 2004, 7:03:34 AM

you're welcome but... hmm...

I can't remember what i did to deserve your thanks.
could you please refresh my memory?

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~evad Dec 27, 2003, 10:53:46 PM

JustB is plagiarising your work. Want me to get him for you? I'll wear him down with a big warm hug until he's defenseless against my smooch.

don't you worry.

~evad Nov 18, 2003, 12:32:24 AM

I wrote a poem for you. "Passage".

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I kissed you in a style Clark Gable would admire, I thought it classic.

My icon was made with

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's by *82deg

~zealivityfive Sep 27, 2003, 9:16:44 PM

i never got a chance to thank you for your comment on void...

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~evad Sep 4, 2003, 9:40:29 AM

Luigi in 3D. I'd tap that.

Tap dance outta here SUCKA!

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I kissed you in a style Clark Gable would admire, I thought it classic.

My icon was made with

and

's by *82deg

~evad Aug 8, 2003, 5:53:41 PM

I'd like that. I've missed your occasional kiss, they were cute and sentimental.

~lengleng Aug 7, 2003, 11:56:13 AM

thank you for the feedback, i will continue to read the comments and think about what you said: in referring to her not understanding things in baseball - yes that is what i was trying to say but what i meant was

she didn't understand that people today say baseballs are "juiced" and thats why we hit 70 or more homeruns in a season, what i said was baseballs aren't juiced its just the japenese who tie the baseballs together are stronger now and tie them tighter so they are harder and go farther.....

japenese being stronger is another part of the metaphor earlier in the peice ^_^ anyway

thank you for taking the time to read them and think about them and give helpful thoughts/suggestions

i appreciate it :D (Big Grin)